Hopefully, there is enough of the feminine in this theme piece that I shall not be required to edit much for the written outline.

There are certain kinks in the timeline pertaining to where Chapter One ends and Chapter Two begins. I hope there will be no need to redivide the novel structurally.

The Lovecraftian subtheme might be a little too much, but I am willing to give it the benefit of the doubt. I must remember, though, that the Amun: Pride motif related to the god Amun Ra in Egyptian mythology, correspondent to Apollo, and translating in the novel in pride of knowledge and, on a personal level for Livia, of friendship in the form of Felicia.